Friday, October 9, 2009

.: Day 1- My Kuala Lumpur Adventure:.


Hi all! I've just reached Kuala Lumpur to start off my trip to Malaysia. First up, I visited Petronas Towers, the tallest building in Malaysia.

Then, I took a taxi and went to the National Mosque of Malaysia. It was amazing to be there as it is the biggest mosque in Malaysia and is definitely much bigger than the Sultan Mosque in Singapore (the biggest mosque in Singapore). It has nice architecture too!

a view from inside the mosque


a view of the mosque from the outside
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  1. Mr RezUanOctober 19, 2009 at 8:46 PM

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  2. Mr RezUanOctober 19, 2009 at 9:04 PM

    Sources and Accuracy : 2
    - Sources were limited but information given is accurate (as Twin Towers and Mosque really exist in Kuala Lumpur). More sources could be used and sources of photos or videos should be quoted

    Grammar : 4
    - There are no spelling, grammatical errors. Well done!

    Attractiveness : 3
    - There is good use of font and colour in the blogpost but a wider or more attractive colours can be used.

    Content : 1
    - Blog post is not convincing as it does not help to persuade the reader about the reasons to go there. More information or pros of visiting such a place can be provided.

    Organization : 3
    - Information is well-organized as pictures are used to illustrate the text that is being discusssed.

    Overall : 13/20

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